Objectively speaking, the research part of the first product is rather empty, the concept is too big, there is no in-depth excavation, and it has been implemented to the point. I like the second product very much, and the third concept is OK, but the final product has no support at all, and the cat will collapse when it goes up.

Too many times

if you can't find a job, you can chat privately. I am paid to help improve quickly.

Although don't bully young people into poverty, your university is really a waste.

For the first product, it is not necessary for the fan to rotate together. The inside rotates separately or even the internal fan blades can rotate. It is better to design a fan that can blow at multiple angles at the same time, because in the application scenario of the kitchen, it is generally not necessary to adjust that thing separately when cooking, or you can make a design that the wind direction automatically follows people. The second pet sofa chair has a good idea, but structurally, why does your backrest only design a general backrest? People's comfort should be considered first for common products. People are the first and pets are the second. Your backrest is definitely uncomfortable. Perhaps the original intention of designing this backrest should be to facilitate cats to rest on it, but it can also be optimized, in essence, there is already a platform for cats to rest next to your chair. The backrest is completely unnecessary to be half done, and the size of the cat scratch board is too small to be bigger. In a chair like yours, only multi-layer boards can be used in technology, and the solid wood material displayed in your rendering is recommended to be optimized. The last backpack is not recommended to be put together with the other two. You have to think clearly that you are a product designer. If you put the backpack, I still feel that it does not match your first two styles. The front is just some simple opinions. I graduated from the design of 23 2 products and worked as a furniture designer in Shenzhen. I also designed pet furniture before. I am not interested in id design, I suggest you try other designs.

Apart from anything else, buddy, can you adjust the typesetting spacing? this is the most basic thing

Just find a class and learn it again.

Come on.

Let's hurry down the first work. It affects the first impression too much. It is too different from the following two.

The school is good, sign up for a class and make progress quickly, so the portfolio will be redone.

Looking at the products, the summary is that they are a little stiff, and the aesthetic feeling is almost interesting.

Come on.

Will three works be too few in four years of college? What is the significance of putting up sketch exercises?

Brother, if you can't, go to a class. Shenzhen design company of this level doesn't want you for 2k. Or change your business. Otherwise, if you do this id in your first year, it doesn't feel much different from starting over. If you want to make progress, you have to see if you have met a noble person. There is too much difference.

Brother Shenzhen