I have no internship experience
Want to accumulate work experience before formal work
There are many deficiencies in the works. I hope you can help me point them out. Thank you very much.
If interested bosses take a fancy to me, they can take me away at any time, haha
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Go and take a professional photo, it will definitely be useful in the future
Young people should be a little arrogant. when you look at your software foundation, you can refute what others say. they may not understand the product. it may be their problem
Sketches are not indispensable either. Avoid putting parts that you are not good at. The portfolio needs to foster strengths and avoid weaknesses.
Suggest to change to
First of all, the only highlight of your portfolio is that the layout is clear and clean. From the perspective of the work, it is basically too conceptual. You can start from the direction of household appliances or children's products. The second point is that the starting point of the work is good, but from the perspective of the model, the work is too simple. The design point of your plan is not prominent enough, but you can refine the model to make up for this, instead of a random box, in this way, you can't show your design ability, and at the same time, it doesn't give people a strong effect of software foundation. Besides the first work, the latter two don't describe the function of the product, that is, a few rendering drawings are hastily done, the detailed drawings, the functional analysis drawings, the use scene diagrams of characters, etc.
Find a training class to optimize the portfolio
Advantages: 1. The rendering level is still acceptable, and the visual expression of the product is good.
2. have ideas, three strong than me
Disadvantages: 1. The level of hand-painting should be improved well, it is too untidy, and you can't see the appearance of learning hand-painting.
2. After the product design is completed, there are almost no functions, usage methods, etc., which leads others to see you as a thing and don't know how to use it. Where is the design point? This is much more important than rendering. The soul of industrial design is to design usable products, not high appearance.
Suggestion: 1. You can find one or two good works to learn, copy and learn its process, which is much better than blindly touching the cable yourself.
2. Practice expression ability and hand drawing ability
3. The most pertinent suggestion: change your career as soon as possible. There is no future in this business now.
Too abstract
At the beginning of staying in bed at home, the description of this function is not clear and it is difficult to understand. then, the additional description words on the following design drawing are too small. at first glance, I think the PH value test
In fact, I can't understand the old man's massage at home. I also don't quite understand it. I feel that it has nothing to do with walnut products. unlike walnut products, the final landing effect and software are only the key to landing and selling skills.
It's not bad in the eyes of students, but it's still hard to recruit people in the company! Come on, it's just a junior.
If you want to do commercial design, don't use abstract design first. Some points you can't grasp easily and can't achieve the design effect. Of course, this is also the inertial trend of design in your student days. I hope you can do more design products close to the market. Also, twelve o'clock is not too much to play
The "personal opinion" of a rookie who has graduated for two years should improve the expressive force of the product. As the brother in front said, the first one doesn't know anything, but he doesn't have the desire to look at the back. It may be better to put the back forward and change the order. The first two functions are too vague. I didn't understand how to use the first one. The second solution is too troublesome, do you think you will buy it even if you want to stop yourself from watching your mobile phone at night, but it is only a junior who may go to the company for an internship for a period of time. Also, it is better to put four or five products in the university portfolio. Come on.
In fact, it is OK for students to make it like this, but your product expression is not clear enough, and there are too few usage diagrams of the product to understand how to use it, which leads to the solution you have given to the problem, which makes people feel that it is not very good.
First, there is too little work. Second, I don't even know what the first product is for a long time. I have no desire to look at it. I just have one problem and one stone.